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I stopped and sat on a bench by the sea
it was a bored Sunday and the breeze
was at its quiet business.

There was a solitary, rare tree
standing next to me,
I looked at it closely,
the little branches revealed a patient symmetry
of neat grids of leaves,
descending into the tree’s shade - a natural blueprint,
ordered and free.

I thought of the final moments
of the first and fourth
Star Wars instalment,
when Luke came of age
by shooting into that little chute.

We do what we have to do.

Families gather and disperse,
people breathe in
the approaching spring twilight.
But nothing can distract me
from my journey back
to an endless, plastic space.
©2008-2010 ~CaffeineIsMe
:iconcaffeineisme:

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A Sentimental Lyric As Prompted by A Memory of the Final Scene in Star Wars, In Which Luke Skywalker brings Down the Death Star By Shooting two Proton Torpedoes into Its Achilles Heel

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:iconadastra14:
hmm interessante man.

liked that Luke had a mention :D
:iconcaffeineisme:
thanks dude, that was kinda the point :)
hope you're doing aaaiit

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